| "Naruto, Sakurka, Sasuke and Hinata!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: pure.insanity123 On: April 26, 2008 02:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
i mean you have bad grammar!!
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Reviewed By: pure.insanity123 On: April 26, 2008 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
you have really really bad bad humor!!! its soo nonsense i dint get it at all sorry
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Reviewed By: rukiia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks, okay, I know.. I'm not good in English.
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Title: Cool!!!!
Reviewed By: TamTam On: January 03, 2008 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was interesting but you need to write correct english so people will understand it I almost didn't understand it so you need to heck for mistakes.By the way a baby isn't born in two months it's impossible even if it's premature.So please write better so it will be understandable.But other than those it's a great fanfic.Update soon I'm the original KAdj they won't let me use the name anymore*sobs*
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