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"The Other Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 02, 2008 19:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
-TAPS PENCIL ON PAPER-hm.. i guess its ok. `sessh-smirk-i like it. i always liked being rich. ~inu- yea! i get every girl i want! ~sessh- i bet i know one u cant get! ~inu- who? ~sessh-whispers something in his ear- ~inu- i bet i can! ~tba- bored bored bored bored bored ~inu- will u go out with me tba? ~tba-bored bored bored bored bored bored ....... -turns to inu- did u say somthing? ~inu- i uh.. ~tba- well ok. -turns back around-bored bored bored bored bored bored bored bored bored bored ~inu- ok. second time. WILL U GO OUT WITH ME? ~tba- did u say something sesshomaru? ~sessh-smirk- none wat so ever ~tba- uh.. well. ok. bored bored bored bored bored ~inu- thirds time the charm! TBA WILL U GO OUT WITH ME? ~TBA- TURNS AROUND- OFCORSE ILL GO OUT WITH U- ~inu- yesss i- Tba- runs and hugs sessh- id love to go on a date with u! why didnt u say something sooner? ~SESSH- well .. i didnt know how to say it. ~tba+sessh- walks away and leaves inu alone- ~inu- i hate girls. ~voice- SITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~

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