Reviewed By:dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 21:33 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: It was a bit short but a good story. I think you really could do a Negi/Kaede story if you use this as a basis for it. Maybe Negi does walk up to her camp one day after a stressful day or something like that. It could work if you follow a tone similar to this. You could even spend parts of it in Kaede's point of view to get a better view of her thoughts and feelings.