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| "Your guardian Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 09:48 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhh...fluffy, fluffy fluff fluff. yay, i like it! her guardian angel huh? I love the song, and i like how you used it's lyrics and meaning into your fic. it just made the fic more life like and real.
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Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to leave a little review to commend your work. Your story was very cute and had just the right amount of fluff/seriousness mixed together. I also love the song Your Guardian Angel, by the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, it's one of my favorites and I must say that after reading this fic, whenever I hear it Ichigo and Rukia will come to mind. Just be careful with your syntax and your grammar. If you work on those a bit and your stories will improve tenfold. Hope to see more from you soon!
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