| "Spoils of War" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ibskib [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2012 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story, I've always felt a bit bad for canon Keitaro, this feels a bit more like real life, where there's limits to how long people are willing to wait before going on with their life |
Reviewed By: BukkakeNoJutsu On: March 20, 2012 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great read with an awesome OC |
Reviewed By: jubs On: October 05, 2008 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I periodically check back to see if you've put out more stories, and everytime I see something new I'm left speechless by your ability to write. I thank my friend for linking Loss and Redemption some years back, since it's the single best story I've ever read. Love Hina has always been my favorite manga and I always thought that Akamatsu made an error pairing Keitaro and Naru together, but thanks to you, all is well in the world. If I'm ever get rich, one of the first things I'm going to do is call Akamatsu and make him draw a doujinshi about Loss and Redemption, simply because that's the way it should be. Even if it would only be for my own enjoyment. I hope from the bottom of my heart that you keep up with this, you're the only author besides Terry Pratchett that I check up on regularly.
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Reviewed By: Zaz On: July 14, 2008 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the fifth time I've read this fanfic and I've found that no more than 6 people have reviewed it since its creation. It's quite a unique element to play with in the LH universe and I'm quite surprised more people haven't praised it. The only reason I could believe caused this is the title of your work. It only makes sense after you read the story and most people would assume it was an actual war story. Hell, the first time I saw it I thought there was going to be more action involved (... of a different manner, of course). Of course, I'm not saying that I was displeased with being proved wrong, but all the same the title can be misleading. I hope you take up the pen again soon, I look forward to seeing more of your works.
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Reviewed By: Timmy TIm On: April 03, 2008 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is some of the most orginal thing ive seen for this anime. It was unexpected bet enjoyable. This is well perfect, it may sound like im exaduratin but this is some of the best writen work ive ever seen.
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Reviewed By: Havoc80 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is simply nothing that i could say that would do this...this piece of art any justice. Much like your other readers, I have found you to be one of the best if not THE best writers out there. I only hope to be able to write something as artful as this as well as your other stories have been. Havoc.
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Reviewed By: Soh12 On: January 18, 2008 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, anoher great work from you. I had the idea of Keitaro finding his confidence in the arms of a call girl, but not the follow thru of a relationship with one. Guess I was too slow on the idea though. I am glad you wrote it though, as my story would not be as good as yours. I have an idea for a story that I think you would do a very good job of writing, as I do not know if I would do it justice or not. It would involve Mitsume and her mother. I know you are partial to the Aoyama clan type stories, but I think this would be a good WAFF story with your style behind it. Oh well until your next work, have a good one. Soth12
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Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 05:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story that i have, mybe long for a one-shot but who cares, very origanl story, never seen a fan fic were the main character falls for an "escort". hope you keep writing more fics
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Reviewed By: Drazen_Flames On: January 17, 2008 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn man, That was pretty different from what I'm used to reading, very well done. Interesting take on how Kei gets over his problems with the girls by ending up with a different girl, whereas the Hina girls straggled too long. Again, I applaud your work, and I hope to see more work if any.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: m-painn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you are seriously one of the best writers i have ever read.... sure its a lemon but the way your write it is so vivid, its like i can see it... well the stories you write are amazing
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