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| "Final Fantasy VIII : Return of the Sorceress" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 19:24 CST
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I noticed the last time you submitted a chapter was July 2002!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Buddy its Jan.2005 right now....UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 19:16 CST
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I like your story so far.I like how u go like this, Squall:Hi instead of "Hi,"Squall said.I write like that in my comedy fics but not in my stories like adventure.Also,could you review my fic for me.Final fantasy:The Ultimate Quest its an FF7/8/10 crossover.If you`ve never played FF7 or 10 dont worry,you`ll understand it if u look at Squall`s point of view.Back to your fic,please dont bold it,it`s anoying.
| Reviewed By: DragonessEve [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I got your e-mail and I read your fic! It's really really great! Off to a perfect start! But you also had a minninum amount of spelling errors. That's all right, just reread your work after you are done typing your chapters up. k? Also, don't rush the stroy tooo much..you need to add a bit more detail, that's all! Plus, Lionheart is Squall's ultimate wqeapon, but to give Tyranis right away a powerful weapon is, not good. He should start off witha basic gun blade. unless you have four or five new upgrades for lionheart........well, I can't wait to read more! Very good and it has quite caught me in it's spell...so I'm impatient.......when's the next chapter going to be updated? Oh and I love the little love triangle there.....well it seems like it! ^^;;;;;; |
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