| "First Date" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | 
| Title: First Date Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 17, 2005 11:28 CST
 Comment/Review:
 I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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| Reviewed By: Serena Tskino Briefs  On: February 19, 2003 12:19 CST Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 The fic was really great! I think Trunks and Serena make a good couple. A little speling mistakes, but other that that, it was very cool and well written!
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| Reviewed By: Prchibichibi  On: November 02, 2002 17:49 CST Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 i love this fic because it was full of surprises and Serena and trunks make a good couple
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| Reviewed By: Cutti_Kitty  On: September 22, 2002 20:07 CDT Comment/Review:
 Hay that was ok i sure wnt to know if their going out again and expecting MORE than what they wanted.
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| Reviewed By: caty  On: July 13, 2002 18:05 CDT Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 i think it sexy the way you put trunks/serena together. next time put pic in them.
 
 caty
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| Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2002 17:07 CDT Comment/Review:
 Yep. You know who this iz. Very well written and i am very impressed ^__^ Kudos 2 u!!
 ~*Queenie*~
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