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| "Retaliation; the Trouble Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Wawashkesh On: July 29, 2008 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the story line. To have their ancestors come back and teach them what they have forgotten is a very original plotline.
| Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing 10: because they way that you write it is very easy to follow the story. good job. spelling & grammar 10: there may be a few slips, but overall perfect. the end. originality 10: because this story IS very original, the plot is wonderful and all of the characters personalities fit that of the show. enjoyment factor 10: well my email should explain this:] overall rating 10: I WANT TO READ MORE! love this story:]
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