| "Mercy Date" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: Causality Star On: April 09, 2011 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm impressed! You actually made me like a Master Roshi pairing. This was also funny and believable. I've always wondered what Master Roshi would do if there was actually a girl willing to sleep with him. Now, let's hope that Lunch doesn't sneeze mid-way through. |
Title: Gah!
Reviewed By: GutterBall (not signed in) On: March 12, 2008 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"So you're doing this out of pity? Poor old man, the women won't touch him with a 10-foot pole. Is that it?" - "Partly, yes." - "I'll take it." - HA! That SLAYS me! It's so you, OE! Many kudos to you for this monstrosity. But what did I expect from the woman who came up with...well...you know the one. *wink* Poor, poor Goku....
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Title: No way!!!!
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 10:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Hahahaha, you had me dying laughing! What a great one-shot. So funny! Thanks for the laugh =).
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Reviewed By: qwaynt On: January 29, 2008 08:45 EST
Comment/Review:
Very well done and you actually make this believable. I can so see something like this happening, but what a mess if she were to sneeze!
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (it's me) On: January 29, 2008 08:28 EST
Comment/Review:
*snicker* We just knew she couldn't be as sweet and innocent as she pretended to be. Not surprised Roshi would accept pity sex.
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Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 04:55 EST
Comment/Review:
Now there's a pairing I wouldn't have imagined, but you made it work. Not only that, but you made it both humorous and believable. Thanks for a fun read. :)
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