| "Locked Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Saiya_asakusa On: May 19, 2008 01:51 CDT
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heyy! Cool story! if you've updated could you send it to saiya_asakusa@yahoo.co.in ? please!!
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Title: BTW
Reviewed By: LadyCisqua(didnot logged in... sorry) On: April 27, 2008 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
btw... would it be okay if you read mine? Thanks very much!
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: LadyCisqua(didnot logged in... sorry) On: April 27, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice plot! you have to work on your errors though. i have lots of errors in my fic,. but hey! you could minimize it, right? keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: DrakeTheDuelist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The premise is a great one, and your writing style is clearly quite sophisticated compared to a good 80% of other CCS fics seen scattered around. Though there are some slight mature themes (mentions of Sakura "selling her body" for one), so you might want to at least mention some kind of warnings, if not raising your rating. Nothing against that kind of thing though. IMHO, so long as it's not vulgar for the sake of vulgarity, it's a brutal reality that they shouldn't be magically impervious to just because they're CLAMP characters. *** What confuses me though is how "Alternate Universe" your fic is. In some ways, you seem to follow CLAMP's version of Sakura and Syaoran (and other characters) with utmost loyalty, yet on other points you deviate. It's a difficult fic to follow because you seem to assume that your readers know what went on between Sakura and Syaoran in their previous meetings. Just something to keep in mind when you continue writing. *** And yes, MM.org seems to be heavy on readership and low on reviews, trust me.
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Reviewed By: rissybabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you're doing with the story so far but I wish the chapters were longer! keep writing! XD
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Reviewed By: rissybabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep going
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Reviewed By: Haru~ On: February 02, 2008 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I hope you can update soon :3
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