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"So Innocent" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Reviewed By: ggctuk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 04:57 CST Rating(s): Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: A very good beginning. I would like to see this continued.
Reviewed By: Bulmafox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 18:30 CDT Comment/Review: Wow...that was pretty good. That's the first Hotaru/Chibi-usa fic I've read. One thing, though. Since we're (meaning I'm ^_~) so used to seeing her as a kid, it might help to spend some time on how much she's matured (if at all), to make the story seem less loli-ish. Unless loli was your intentioon.

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