| "Wish For The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is getting too good! I had read like the first two chapters of this at FFN and then lost the link to the story! I am sooooooo glad I found it again! This is such a great story!!! Whoo-hooo!!!
Great job! |
Reviewed By: nagake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hilarous, i love it!
Keep it comin... |
Reviewed By: Frozenflower (not logged in) On: July 13, 2002 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Brenda, you're updating so quickly, I can't believe it! Anyway, here at the library now since I'm computerless for next week or so =*( and I decided to leave you a review! You know I love this story, good luck with the chibis! |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so funny. I'm loving it. I feel bad for Bardock though, you know with him being so sad that Goten will be leaving (though after that prank those three just played on him, I'm sure he's more than ready to get rid of his chibi look a like). Anyway, I hope he gets to go back to the future with Goten and Trunks. Can't wait for you to update. |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW ADORABLY CUTE!!!!!! AWWWWWWW!!!! Chibi Vegeta huggeling wittle Goten, and wittle Twunks sweeping beside chibi Vegeta! *cuteness overload warning! cuteness overload warning!*
*Cosmo melt from cuteness overload*
cute story, great plot! I only wish that they had gone for Earth's dragon balls so that Chibi Vegeta could meet Chibi Goku and Bulma! That would have been too cute! ~ Majin Cosmo |
Reviewed By: Syaoran's Blossom On: July 10, 2002 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha! FF.net is going to have competition soon if so many people are moving to mediaminer.org while ff.net is fixing up! Well, I already read this chapter on ff.net but I wanted to say it was superb... even after the hundredth millionth (Is that a word?) time I read it! |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. This fic is really good, so you have to update, soon, like now. Love the fic!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Grins and yawns* I am getting sleepy...Sleepy...This isn't working, oh well, i'll review anyway. Great story, I read it on ff.net and liked it so much, I stopped in here. ^_^ Later! This if for chapter 13, by the way. |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Burenda! *waves* It's H4L! (At least on ff.net, here it's H4E.) I just had to read this, and I was totally blown away. It sort of reminds me of Lady Moonlight's "Trunks and Goten's Bogus Adventure" series she has going. Both of your stories are very similar, yet different. I like the differences! Good job, and hurry up and upload the remaining chapters, would ya? |
Reviewed By: Burenda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 05:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know about the OOCness. For the chibis, it's easy to explain, since they're just chibis (e.g. no one REALLY knows Vegeta's personality as a child). With Bardock, though... *sighs* I hadn't seen the Bardock special when I wrote this (still haven't ARGH!) and I'm kinda sad to say that I did the worst job on his character, in my opinion. At least so far as keeping in In Character. *sighs* Oh well. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bwahahahah!! Thats just plain awsome. You use some great forshadowing in the story and although some of the charactors seem to be just a bit (a very little bit) OOC you seem to stay with thier basic personalities very well. Great job. I cant wait for the rest to be written/uploaded.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Darkfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will never tire of reading that chapter! Jello!
*giggle* |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved this fic ever since I started reading it way back and fanfiction.net. Too bad the stupid thing had to go down....anyway...this is a great fanfic, so get the new stuff up really quickly!! |
Reviewed By: Gabriel On: July 08, 2002 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how many chapters are there and how will you be updateing
plz e-mail me at blue_pyro@hotmail.com thx
im not that good @ describing how i liked the story so ill
hope that the rating is enough |
Reviewed By: Tapion Trunks On: July 07, 2002 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you haven't changed the story much Brenda. A few authors notes but other than that i don't see much difference.
Hope FF.Net is up soon. Anyway, just for the record, great story! |
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