| "Wish For The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: overly awsome :)
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 On: August 30, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best one that i've read (and longest) yet!! it's very funny, and uses every characters pesonalatys in the best way! I only wish you'd used sceans from the prsent (future for Bardock). I only gave you a 9 in sp&gram. because Raditz is spelled w/ 1 d. Anyway, I hope you make more great fanfictions!! See ya :) Oh yeah, pilaf is a moronic bitch of an idiot :) Thanx for letting me vent. ::holds up peace sign and dances like there's no tomarrow::
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena (LadyKATT) On: December 07, 2004 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool I realy enjoyed reading this story It would be cool if a sequil was done about the adventures of Goku and Vegeta, Bulma I had an idea about one but wouldlike your concent first EMail Katt39@hotmail.com Thanks Bye LadyKATT
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: axelalx On: December 01, 2004 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write a sequal and with guku gone from the earth the evil would not even come to earth because it even stated in DB, DBZ, and DBGT that the evil was atracted to gokus good, like yin and yang, two halfs becoming one.
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Reviewed By: Snow Lady On: November 10, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww so sad I hope they make it ok Poor Vegeta so confused PLease up-date soon Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: redflowerz On: June 18, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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skoolz out in most places u should hav plenty of time 2 update! HURRY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: purplemonkeygurl On: June 18, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hurry and update this is a really good story! i hope they all get to meet the future parents and family that would be interesting to say the least!LOL!
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Reviewed By: Jedi_Bubbles On: June 12, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's all wonderful! I love it! It's hilarious. Post more soon please! *Son puppy dog look*( i don't own that look, Akira Toriyama owns it.)
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoyed this fic please up-date soon. Poor Goku, he finds out he has a father now must lose him again. Well bye for now. BYE BYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:25 CDT
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Title: it drives me nutz to see the really good storieslike this unfinished...
Reviewed By: ladyvaltaya On: May 04, 2004 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, and I know you are probably as busy as I am, but I am DYING to see how this story ends. LOL if you see this, please know that I mean every word of it. ^_~ Yes it's really me... damn media miner won't let me do any signed reviews today for some reason.... grrr
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Reviewed By: giggles101988 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first, everyone does something like this and I think that it's just stupid, but if you like it, go ahead and write it, I'm not judging you. Also, Raisu is not a play off rice. I know, I speak Japanese fluently. Gohan means rice. All in all I like this story, but you seriously need a life if you can type up 68 chapters. LOL. If you'd like, yo can read the story that I have up. Mediaminer messed it up. I'm under trunksgirl0123. My friend named me that because I'm "obsessed" with Trunks and Vegeta. I hope that you don't take anthing personally. I only wanted to correct your error in Japanese. Thanx for reading.
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Reviewed By: fghd On: March 27, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think Bardock was a little OOC. he was kind of...um...touchy feely...but its a good story keep on writing!
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Title: Poor Vegeta
Reviewed By: This is Lady Valtaya... just too lazy to log in On: March 23, 2004 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He just doesn't understand that his father was proud of him all the time... That the formality of his station usually meant he had to have some reason to give him to say it. The characterizations and your style are only getting better! Keep it up!!!!!!!!! up!
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Reviewed By: hatemaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:25 CST
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i think this is one of the best fan fic,s i have ever read although i have one request super saiyan raditz and bardock they would rule get rid of normal saiyan *picks up sycthe and slices a picture of normal raditz and bardock*
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Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 23:47 CST
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Are you still writing this story and if so are you posting it on media miner? If not can you give me the address of where I can find it. I love the plot and your writing is awsome. i really hope you havn't decided to just... stop... |
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