| "Yesterday's Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 22:46 CDT
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I hope that you're fine... i just want to tell you thta you're fic it's really great... i read it since you upload it here... i just really like it... i couldn't stop reading xD... well... i write too... and when you feel bad... or sad... write helps... i'm not telling you to write in this fic... just write something else and i think i'll help you... or relax you... my best wishes for you and you're family... you write great... byebye...
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 22:36 CDT
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I am sorry to hear about your grandmother. I hope that you are doing alright. :o) Your story is amazing! Yikes this chapter is so angst-filled... poor Kagome. She's just so tormented. I am surprised she gave in so easily... but then, Naraku did discover her weakness. I hope she will be able to break his control over her. I can't wait to read the next chapteer!!
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 20:58 CDT
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Im so sorry to hear about ur grandmother. I luv your story and wish for you to continue when you can.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: March 15, 2008 14:02 CDT
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Very well written! I'm enjoying the story thus-far, it's a nice continuation that focuses on how each of them are feeling right now. I'll admit, I had a hard time believing that Kagome would give in so willingly, so I'm pleased to see her fighting herself in her own mind, kind of like she did when Hakudoshi was toying with her soul to use her eyes. All in all - very well written, nice focus, and excellent job keeping characters... well, in-character!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 13:56 CDT
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oh my god. I love these chapters, but I hate how you make them suspense full, so we have to wait until next time. God damn. But, I'm sorry to hear about you're grandmother. Mine died like 5 years ago. I know how sorry doesn't always help, just sometimes makes it worse. But I hope you take it okay. I mean, sometimes it makes you go crazy or something. Hope you can update soon, but take your time. Update When You Can, Take You Time, And Have A Nice Day!
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Reviewed By: The Flaming Pheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 14:23 CST
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please update soon.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 04:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I just read your first 3 chapters! Great job!! I really enjoyed your story! I have to know what happens... it's definitely got me hooked :o) I really like your storyline... I think it's the traditional Inuyasha-Kikyo-Kagome love triangle we all love but with a unique twist. I can't wait to read more!! :o)
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 17:35 CST
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wow...please update soon. But what was with all those A's in the muddle of the paragraphs and stuff? Anyways please update again soon. And I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother, Mine died a couple years ago. Hope things turn out okay. ~_~Hitsugaya630~_~
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Reviewed By: saygoodnight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting very good!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I love it! I think it was a good idea to use some things form the manga. And I like how Rumiko uputs Byakuya in those funny situations too. And the way his eye leaves his head. That's amazing. Great story btw. Please update soon and Have A Nice Day!
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