| "The Game of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 02, 2008 20:23 CDT
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Still enjoying this a lot. I'm glad Aya got a little revenge in with the razors.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: July 20, 2008 22:58 CDT
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I'm so enjoying this. I hope she gets him good, though I must admit I'm terribly worried about her safety. I know Crawford and Schuldig are planning murder and worse.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely delicious! Crawford and Schuldig are wonderfully in character, and Aya is completely believable. I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: jb1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this and I like the use of Aya and Crawford as main characters. Aya must have a "definite" personality given her brother and that's coming out well so far. (Maybe I just identify with difficult women.) Crawford's always a tricky balancing act but I like how he seems to be neither a complete villain nor a sweet guy in your story. Please continue to write so I can read more.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 14, 2008 00:47 CST
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intriguing start
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Reviewed By: DF On: February 13, 2008 23:19 CST
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How funny, I couldn't *imagine* a WK het fic I'd read [I mean, why bother - that's SO not why we're all here] but I read a few paragraphs anyway and was caught by your writing style. Very nicely done ! Now I will have to follow this one and see where it leads, if only to see Schuldig having to cook. Thanks for the nice surprise.
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