| "The Ultimate Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: IMPORTANT NOTICE
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't upload chapters to this site because I haven't fix the file format problem yet so if you're interested in reading the Ultimate tournament go to fanfiction.net under my profile I have uploaded chapters 11,12 and 13.
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Reviewed By: Burring Truth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo I just came across this fic of yours and from what I've read of the first chapter its good and it had the ability to become better. But the first chapter's grammer is some what choppy even if its still readable the chapter could be so much better if you fixed this chapter's grammer problems. Still the originality of this story is great so I hope the you weitting it. Latter.
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Title: Keep up the good work
Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you have written so far and I can't wait for the first round to begin...just for fun have Naruto Sasuke or Sakura slip up and accidently use some ninjutsu some where in the future.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 15:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting. Very bad foreshadowing, but very fun planning. Just keep it up. So, update soon, ja ne.
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