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 Title: Chapter 133: V--you get the point.
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2011 06:35 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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So, she ended up in the bed after all. Damn, I can FEEL Evan's sexual frustration. It'd bedamned ironic if, if he DOES find a willing woman and the situation is set up perfectly to "release his tension" and homeboy goes flacid. The fact that his Youkai voice even SUGGESTED that he reveal his heritgae speaks volumes of the situation. It's deep when, this far in, even his youkai side's just as unsure of things as he is. And, V, you're not helping things. Sometimes, I see a relly big and bold and SHARP argument coming soon; one where the blinders aren't just taken off, but are totally disintergrated. Cracks me up imagining this Purity continuation reaching 200 chapters, but the way things are going...well, lemme not jinx the "happy couple". The past couple chapters, reading of V's wet dreams was hilarious--like a mental slap in the face to her indecisiveness. Hell, physical, too, if reactions have anything to do with it. **grumblefrownsimmer**
 Title: Chapter 131: V!
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2011 06:26 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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What. The. Hell, woman! Okay, he gave in, as I suspected he would, poor sod, and she's giving him passive-aggressive (possessive) vibes left and right. Maybe the sad little girl in her's seeking the atention she knows--or assumes--is generally the norm with Evan. I'm all for character development so, as with Sydnie in Phantasm, I reserve judgment AMAP. She ticked off a couple readers, too. I know V's issues, so I'm trying to be patient. Maybe she IS trying to straddle the fence with Marvin and Evan a bit...not nice, but I can see how it could happen. Love the fact that he's got his own island, btw. Poor, mixed up, horny-as-a;l-get-out, hurt Evan...
 Title: Chapter 130: V....
Reviewed By: sueroxmysox [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2011 06:22 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Um...there are no words to speak of the...disbelief I'm feelign at V's, what?, selfishness, utter disalloawance of Evan's feelings, denial of being brushed off totally. Evan, being so blunt and all is, strangely, refreshing. She doesn't seem to be gettign the point. Or has he spoiled you so much that you don't get it when No means "NO, woman!!!"? Huh. I guess I DID have words...
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2011 18:52 PST
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hehe, aw Evan. much love for the angsty-ness of these past few chapters. :3 aahh the lovely angst. btw, is the unlock the car w/ a phone idea inspired by the recent tv car commercials advertising it? :D maybe not, but that's the first thing i thought of, like when in the commercial the wife like plays with the phone and turns it on and off, flipping the car lights on and off, and then the guys are like "ok, now she's just playing with us" XD loved it as always~ waiting patiently~ ~FF7I
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2011 01:29 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor evan.
 Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 13:24 PST
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I really do not like Valerie in these last few chapters. She reminds me of the Valerie from the very beginning chapters and I didn't like her then either. She is so wrapped up in herself and what she wants, she isn't taking Evan's feelings into consideration at all. She's jumped down his throat every time he's even looked at another woman and still maintains that she and Evan are "just friends." Now she's whined her way into his acation when he made it clear that she wasn't wanted there, and she's breaking her promise keep her nose out of his sexcapades. I think Evan needs to get laid, if only to teach Valerie a lesson.
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 10:17 PST
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AND I ALMOST FORGOT! HAPPPPPY BIRTHDAY!!! :D HAVE A GREAT ONE!
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 10:16 PST
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Darnit Evan...You and your sweet side. haha Well, hm... Maybe this will give V some real insight into who she should really be with. If she's so hellbent on showing him that he can have fun without girls she better darn well be buttloads of fun. Hm. Great Chapter. I'm interested to see where this goes. -MSMND.
 Title: Chapter 130-131
Reviewed By: reina q [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 05:55 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Happy Birthday! One day before my best friend's! I hope you have cake and other...Birthday-ish things :) You updated before I got to reply to 130, so I didn't get to say anything just then. Here I am saying GREAT chapter as always, the tension and suspense is killing me :) In a good way lol
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 04:10 PST
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Happy birthday Su!!! Your birthday is a day after mine!!! Woohoo! :D. Did not know that but it makes me smile!! Hope it's a good one! Booo to V!! Poor Evan :(.
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 03:13 PST
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SUE!!!!! XD hope your life's been great, and i hope it will continue to be so in the future. :)
 Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 02:10 PST
Comment/Review:
Before I review, Happy Birthday and also I have to say I adore the entire Purity series. I won't tell you the exact number of dreams I've had about how Evan and V finally get together because frankly it scares me (haha). I really loved this chapter but I'm saddened by it as well. I really truly hope that Evan doesn't sleep with anyone. I know V's being selfish and it would serve her right for her behavior (cake and eating it too and all) but I really think if he sleeps with someone and she finds out it's really truly going to break her for good. I'll still love your stories no matter what Evan does, but that was just my thoughts because I got this awful sinking feeling after I finished this chapter that V just may try to swim home next chapter. Thank you for the great story. I have this visual of your characters in my head all the time ready to pop out and whenever I'm bored I try to guess what's going to happen next. I'm always happier with what actually gets written but hey, I've been close a couple times (okay like once haha). I hope that you are feeling better and thank you very much for brightening my days with your updates.
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2011 01:37 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Is it just me or does anyone else want Evan to tell V exactly what he thinks. She's being exceedingly selfish. I can't wait to see where this heads!
 Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2011 21:52 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SUE!!!! Hope you have a good one! =D Ughh, V is really starting to grate on my nerves!! Lolz If she's not going to 'fess up about her feelings for Evan, then she should let the man have fun! I mean, she INITIATES the kiss in Maine, getting his hopes up, only to crush them...It's like Mr. Sheffield telling Miss. Fine he loves her, and then taking it back!!! Where does it END, V???? Okay, I feel better now, lolz. Thanks for the update and Happy Birthday, again!! :)
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2011 21:25 PST
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Happy Birthday Sue!!! Heh, Valerie's not even realizing she's being passive-possessive here, is she? I knew Evan wouldn't last long! Keep up the good work, dark
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