| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 09:18 PST
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All I can say is, if the Wall Street Journal Dude- The "familiar" one- turns out to be Evan in disguise or something, than the guy is a bugger enigma than Da Vinci's Rubix Cube.
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 09:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has nothing about your writing skills because you are a very good writer and you know that. I just prefer to read a fic without a lot of sex. But, you're right Sue, I'll give it a chance. I liked Chapter 2 and anxious to find out who the man was in the resturant. Thanks for writing it. J
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 09:00 PST
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Oh GOD! I have a revelation: I'm a lawyer and if someday a guy like that shows in my office I'll kick him out! Can't believe the jerk! I love Valerie but Evan needs a good spanking...Wait! He might like it LOL
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 08:44 PST
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I'm so glad you are starting on this story. Evan's story is the one I wnat to read the most aside from Gunner's. How I love the bad boy!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 08:41 PST
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Te-hehe, and the plot thickens... I'm rubbing my hands together in utter giddiness. If Evan was a real person, I'd bet he'd be hotter than the sun... Anyway, are we to see my favorite character, Mikio, as we get ready for his very own Purity story? I ask this because he's an attorney.(Right?) And I know him being Evan's lawyer wouldn't be good for plot, but I thought I'd ask anyway.
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 07:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I love Evan! The good in me is saying you dog, but the bad in me is just loving him! lol Can't wait for the next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 06:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this chapter from the forums! oh evan! i was intrigued by the prologue though. I love how since avouchment, you've began stories that allude to the major plot of the story but yet have no real relevance to the start of it. yaaaaaaaaaaay for sue
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 03:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA EVAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And so on and so on...
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Title: YAY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone loves the bad boy, and who's badder than our boy Evan? I am gonna enjoy this!! I've been waiting this story so I'll finally know what makes this boy tick...I will delight in writing reviews for this story!!!!:>
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 21:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah!!! I like Evan. I really do. But, I think I will pass on this one. Just a bit too much sex for my taste in a story. Think I go back and reread some of your old Purity fics but definitely goodies again. Looking forward to reading your other Purity stories that you will post in the future. J
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Damn, indeed! Should definitely be an interesting ride. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:31 PST
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"What's your name" That's priceless lol. Hmmm....what was up with the flashbacks I wonder; and who was this mysterious chick?
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 14:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Evan, you are such a bad puppy... I had forgotten that you mentioned in a previous author note that this story was about Evan. Let's just say it didn't take me very long to remember
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 08:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great beginning!! I have a feeling that I'm going to enjoy Evan's story!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 05:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect that was so very Evan. I can't wait to see where this goes :)
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