| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
breathe... breathe... that is fantastic!!! It's very hard to pick my favourite parts out of all of it.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 14:00 PDT
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OMG, that chapter was hilariuos!!! Keep up the spectacular work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 13:49 PDT
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Bitches huh?! LOL what a great way to end the week! Cleanse her aura well to bad Evan has dibs wait he'd like it if the worked on her chi right infront him! LOL great chap
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Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:34 PDT
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I absolutely love these characters Evan surrounds himself with. Bugs and his Publisher's Clearinghouse letter and Bitches with her Bitches. With a youkai voice like Evan's got, it's no wonder he's the way he is. Thanks for the chapter, I laughed through the entire thing.
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Reviewed By: Amerise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 07:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A steel sofa? painful "I'll tell Bitches that you're my bitches, and then she won't try to grab your bitches again." hahahaha
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HAhahahahahahhaha LOVED IT!! Bitches was great! hahhaha poor V, surrounded by craziness.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:54 PDT
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Bitches... why am I not surprised? Val's gonna have permanent selective sunburn the more of Evan's friends she meets...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the nickname Bitches is just too good. How does Evan collect all these people? He's got his very own freak show following. V got hit on by a lesbian! Ha! I can't wait for more. This is so wonderful and outlandish. I love weird!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 04:50 PDT
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I see myself in evan. This is y he is my favorite. Bitches?! That is hilarious. I have friends like that. The gays and lesbians and the sex fiends. The stuck up 1 that u can't help but luv and the one willing to bone me jus to make me feel better. Ah I luv it. Lmao maybe TMI. But ur an open gal. Lolll neways update soon.
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 01:00 PDT
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OMGa! XD Poor V, totally violated by "Bitches". Evan has the most interesting friends... One of them hits on Valerie and the other totally hates her because Evan was oogling the cookies. It's completely hillarious and I can't wait to read the trial. That should be beyond amusing. I hope the fiance shows up soon.
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Reviewed By: NicoleeRebels [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i sooo looove zeel rooka!! he's sooo hooot xD you have to update this one too!! anyway i love purity 8 too :D update faster pleaseeeeeee!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 05:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I swear everyone when I get into work, as soon as I pull my computer up I look for your updated, because if there is one, I just know that I'm going to have a splendid day. Of course this was a chapter that I already read, but hey, it's something isn't it? Now I'll just sit idly and whay for Kurt and Sam to come into play. Don't worry, I'm a patient girl...
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 00:43 PDT
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Wow...that Marvin guy really is a jerk. A fiance should never be like that. >.< V's just tricking herself. Plus, it was nice seeing the softer side of Evan. He was so sweet to his fans and I liked the way he didn't like V's fiance. Can't wait to see more since they seem to suit each other. Thanks for the update. Didn't even realize another wonderful chapter came out. Thanks, Sue! A nice change compared to P8. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 22:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats so cute that he is so nice to all of his fans.
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Title: Okay, one more question...my bad, I'm senile...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 08:00 PDT
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Will you be creating more Evan fanarts to go with this story?
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