| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 16:58 PST
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My God Evan's so dirty...I Love It! The conversation between Madison and Valerie was completely hilarious! Question though...Is Purity 7 finished or is there still more to come?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 15:12 PST
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Oh, she's going to regret going out with Maddy, I know it lol. That's funny when she says that if V flashed Evan her tits she'd be a ten.
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Reviewed By: kina12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 13:31 PST
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Ooh ive been waiting for Evans story since P5 and im syked! I really dont know how you do it, but its amazing the way you write and the way you capture each character's personality! Ooh man its getting good already, i really cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 13:18 PST
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GAWD I love Evan, I'm glad your posting both stories at the same time. I already love V *snicker* she'll be fun. I'm not sure if I missed it, or not, but have you revealed whether or not Valerie is youkai? Another amazing addition to your collection of greatness.
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey whats going on with purity 8?
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 12:05 PST
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It's fun to mess with people's heads, but there's a time and place for everything. A person can be the sweetest, most innocent thing if you want to see them that way. The same person can be hell on earth for another person entirely. The world is a stage and we all play different parts, sometimes several at the same time. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 10:05 PST
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Madison is hilarious. I wonder when Valerie is going to figure out the "real Evan...or Zel." It's going to be interesting to read! I'm very excited about this story Sue, as I am with all of your others:)
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 07:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like that Madison and "Zel" call Valerie "V". Not so much for the reasons behind it (although that is funny) but I think it's a sweet nickname. I wonder what kind of trouble Madison will get Valerie into...
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 05:27 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 04:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely marvellous i can't wait to see where this goes i always wondered were Evan had met Maddison :)
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 01:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter and now we've met a few of the players :) I've been waiting to hear Evan's tory for ages i can't wait to see what mischief he's going to get into no doubt dragging Valerie along with LOL
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I think Evans becoming one of my favorite characters already.... the Cake Fairy's so is a bit of a handful... (or more...)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 15:08 PST
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I love Evan! He definitely takes after both sides of the family, with Cain getting put in jail for indecent exposure, and Belle and Kich too! Ahaha, I'm really going to love this story; it's going to bring lots of laughs!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 12:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 12:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another awesome fic by the increasingly talented Sue. Can't wat!
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