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 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 12:01 PST
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I meant to also ask..wat the hell is wrong with evan. Lmao does he have ADHD??? The boy can't behave himself when he's bored. And oh my stars he banged some chick and didn't even kno her name. I kno he's sexy gorgeous beyond reason as is all the men of his kin...but yikes that girl is a complete suckerslut. lol I made that up. And oooh boy wonder how inuyasha deals with this grandson. One more thing shouldn't bas and syndie have their 2 children already?
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 11:50 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Omg I love Evan he's so bad! Lol. he breaks away from the traditional purity characters. Although to each their own he is absolutely unique. I can't wait to see how his story developes. Although I always thought he would eventually take maddy as his mate, I finally see that it wont happen. Update soon. And whats going on with vendetta I wanna see Sami's story
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 10:55 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"Pig." "I prefer dog." "Definitely a pig." "Woof." Lmao... Zel has an excuse for everything it seems, maybe that's just part of his boredom showing, heh, and charm, lol. Lets see how he can save his cojones from this debacle, as well as how long it takes for Evan to appear to Ms. Denning. Update when ya can! ;)
 Reviewed By: BobbyJustGotSheared [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 10:06 PST
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Ah, you never cease to amaze me, Sueric. Your talent for writing so many completely contrasting situations and genres perfectly makes me shiver with delight. Evan has been a favorite boy of mine since his sinfully adorable appearance in Phantasm. And I must admit that a bad boy love story is one of my weaknesses. So what I'm trying to say is you've got me hanging on tight to this one, and I can't wait to read more.
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 09:18 PST
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All I can say is, if the Wall Street Journal Dude- The "familiar" one- turns out to be Evan in disguise or something, than the guy is a bugger enigma than Da Vinci's Rubix Cube.
 Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 09:06 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Has nothing about your writing skills because you are a very good writer and you know that. I just prefer to read a fic without a lot of sex. But, you're right Sue, I'll give it a chance. I liked Chapter 2 and anxious to find out who the man was in the resturant. Thanks for writing it. J
 Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 09:00 PST
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Oh GOD! I have a revelation: I'm a lawyer and if someday a guy like that shows in my office I'll kick him out! Can't believe the jerk! I love Valerie but Evan needs a good spanking...Wait! He might like it LOL
 Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 08:44 PST
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I'm so glad you are starting on this story. Evan's story is the one I wnat to read the most aside from Gunner's. How I love the bad boy!
 Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 08:41 PST
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Te-hehe, and the plot thickens... I'm rubbing my hands together in utter giddiness. If Evan was a real person, I'd bet he'd be hotter than the sun... Anyway, are we to see my favorite character, Mikio, as we get ready for his very own Purity story? I ask this because he's an attorney.(Right?) And I know him being Evan's lawyer wouldn't be good for plot, but I thought I'd ask anyway.
 Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 07:23 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yay! I love Evan! The good in me is saying you dog, but the bad in me is just loving him! lol Can't wait for the next chappie!!
 Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 06:59 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I remember this chapter from the forums! oh evan! i was intrigued by the prologue though. I love how since avouchment, you've began stories that allude to the major plot of the story but yet have no real relevance to the start of it. yaaaaaaaaaaay for sue aay a
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 03:54 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YEA EVAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And so on and so on...
 Title: YAY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 22:51 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Everyone loves the bad boy, and who's badder than our boy Evan? I am gonna enjoy this!! I've been waiting this story so I'll finally know what makes this boy tick...I will delight in writing reviews for this story!!!!:>
 Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 21:23 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Woah!!! I like Evan. I really do. But, I think I will pass on this one. Just a bit too much sex for my taste in a story. Think I go back and reread some of your old Purity fics but definitely goodies again. Looking forward to reading your other Purity stories that you will post in the future. J
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 15:49 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy Damn, indeed! Should definitely be an interesting ride. Update when ya can! ;)
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