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 Title: Quick question, Sue...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2008 07:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
Since the beginning of this fic, has Marvin called Valerie ONCE?
 Title: Geez...Evan's got one hell of a bold tongue...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2008 07:48 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What I've always noticed about Evan is, debauchery, crudeness, and Bad Boyisms aside, he's amazingly hoonest. I can see why V is so defensive about her Marvin on the research tip and I guess trying to be mature and patient about the lack of tiem spent together as he's always gone isn't exactly an unheard of concept, but...well, Marvin SUCKS, Sue. Evan just has some rather blunt ways of discussing it. He's a real sweetie, I've noticed in previous Purity stories (though he's not prone to showing it openly) and he really gives a damn. I can't wait for the fluff...okay, for Evan, most likely risque fluff but...well, yeah...this is EVAN here, folks! LOL! Still LMFAO at the wall scaling chappie! I'm still kind of in the dark a bit about the guy that was watching her in the resturant though a random theory is that he's somehow involved in the research from Marvin and pursuit of it. But, that's just me extrapolationg as usual. Anywho, great chaps! Funny as Hell!
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 14:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Evan's not as much of a 'bad boy' as he can seem sometimes. Valerie is just refusing to look at the times when he's his mother's boy, knowing how to treat people properly. And he's right, 1/8th of a carat is... nothing. Isn't that just a shiny speck imbedded in the band? I bet the band isn't even real gold, either. She picked out the cheapest one there, at least, that's what it seems like to me. Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story but I just want to yell at V, he's a good guy. (sighs) Well Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 10:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awww Evan is soooooo bad! LOL But he is right wat kind os relationship is it when u have to pick out your own engagement ring thats supposed to be his job, it tells how well he knows you. Its funny that Zel pointed that out lol
 Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 09:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 05:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to had that Its a gift not just a habit he's developed from being a famous rockstar! And hell its genetic, she would kno that if she knew his real name and who his family is
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 05:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
i'll admit Evan is nasty...completely so...However, I don't like her attitude! She doesn't know a damn thing about him. Evan is the sweetest thing. She can assume all she wants but we kno he's a mama's boy from maine who loves his family, he's just different. 2nd Madison is Nasty as well however nice she is. Its not using if the person complies. So she can shove her self righteous indignant nature. Evan is my favorite purity character hands down. Since he was introduced the man can't help it if he's had a way with women since birth!
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 05:00 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I actually feel quite sorry for Evan.
 Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 04:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
V is just a little too...defensive about Marvin. Evan is picking up on that too, I think. And Evan is so tired of being someone he's not in front of everyone. He wants to show her who he really is so badly, even if he's not fully aware of that desire. Great chapter.
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 02:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awww... outrageous Zel and serious Evan! Awesome combo.
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2008 22:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! We should have seen that Candy girl coming lol. Poor V, Evan's driving her insane! Lol.
 Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2008 15:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Bad, naughty little evan lol. He just knows what to do I guess to get under V's skin. He's so bad but in such a good way lol
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 01, 2008 14:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! Oh gosh, Evan. You just had to talk to her boss didn't ya?! Lol. Poor Val, she's just never going to get a break is she? Lol.
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 01, 2008 14:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
If it wasn't for the Lawyer/client relationship, I swear that she would have strangled him already. Keep up the good work, dark
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