| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 15:33 PDT
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Okay, Marvin really needs to be punched for that! I really can't stand it when people plan stuff and then break them at the last second. Hmm...so this next chapter should be the gala event right? I can't wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 15:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fairly certain Valerie is the girl in Prologue wonder if it is similar to the Ryo-Nezumi story, where Ryo can't remember the details of his encounter with Nezumi in the beginning.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So they are both going alanaural for this even... I wonder what happens when she meets Gin?
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heck yes! Go Val Go! Poor Evan's in for the ride of his life.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 13:44 PDT
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This story is really good! i've finally caught up with you lol cant wait to see what happens when she runs into Zel at the fundraiser!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 12:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i cant wait for the party!!!! when valerie meets the "real" evanXD something tells me shes gonna have a hard time recognizing but then the shock of the whole thing when he tells her whats going onXD lol=D good job on the story=D and thanks for the update=D
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 10:12 PDT
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OMG i figured something out! They've had sex before! Valerie and Evan in the prologue chapter of this story. she was the girl with the honey blonde hair. yay me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the tootsie pop i was eating helped me figure it out. that and all ur chapters have a purpose. and you wouldn't write a chapter about random sex unless it was somehow tied into your story. don't tell me if I'm right or wrong i want to find out through reading if I'm right. but can u please clarify if Val is youkai or not
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:56 PDT
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oh ur so evil! that was a wicked wicked cliff hanger. will evan and valerie recognize each other? i cant wait for the next chapter. but i have a question thats been bothering me for a while now. i thought valerie was youkai. is she?
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:52 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:34 PDT
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OhGeez... I mean, Marvin sounds nice and all, but you really shouldn't marry a guy who will always, ALWAYS place you second or third. Come tot hat, I can't WAIT for Evan's reaction when he sees her all dolled up, true colours and everything...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!!! Oh, oh oh! Now it's starting to make sense. I can't wait till Evan gets a load of her. I wonder if she'll bid on him. Man, you really are sneaky!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 08:50 PDT
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So the same party huh? I wonder will Evan growl when he sees V with Marvin? And how will she feel when someone wants to grab Evvie for a little night cap? LOL Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 07:56 PDT
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...they sold Bas? How the hell did they get him to do that?
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 12:07 PDT
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It's very good so far! You never disappoint, and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 21:26 PDT
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How come I have a feeling that Evan and Val (and Marvin, can't forget the blind idiot) are going to the same charity event? Keep up the good work, dark
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