| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG I almost forgot to review here, sorry. I love Evan he makes me laugh. I really can't wait to see what happens next, how is Evan going to get her to see the light that he really is a good guy.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 12:22 PDT
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Omg I absolutely LOVE this story! Zel and Valerie together is absolutely hilarious and so adorable at the same time. It's going to be interesting with V and her fiancee though... Whatever, I look forward to the next update and most definetely the rest of this story :)
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 09:07 PDT
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Ahhh, Valerie's stuck with Evan now... maybe she'll get to knwo the real him. And dump Marvin the Martian. (yes, Warner Brothers atill runs in the future! :) )
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:sigh: Oh Evan, what ever will we do wih you? I can think of quite a few things I'd like to do... Well, a girl can dream, can't she? I love this story. It is a nice break from all the angst going on in 8. It was a very good decision to write them both at the same time. Great work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvin.... poor lad.. he should go by his middle name or something...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 22:12 PDT
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Finally, someone that can eventually tame that wild beast. Evan needs someone to hold his reins when he gets out of hand, and who knows when to loosen them when the time's appropriate. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:09 PDT
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Poor Valerie!! lol Update soon please and keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:53 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 02:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so he was "human that night?" (thats why the hair and the eye colour(Or color for all you Americans) is different????)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 02:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 22:29 PDT
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You have made another first...never have I laughed during the lemon and now I have! Lol. Poor V, she was mortified and not all at the same time. I love how Evan just gets under her skin like that!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 06:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan's in for a world of trouble LOL I can't wait. Great chapter i love it!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 21:32 PDT
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Twins, eh?... I'm vaguely curious on how that works, but then again, I absolutely shouldn't ask about that. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drool.... this is so good!!! So funny!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 15:31 PDT
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Awesome!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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