| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Val is just stuck between a rock and a hard place. Really, Marvin's not such a bad guy. It just seems as if V takes a backseat sometimes. Who was to be #2 in a guys life, even if only for a second. But, he really does sound like he cares about her, just not enough to marry her. :sighs: I dunno. I'll save my judgment. Great chapter. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 04:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would REALLY recommend getting Marvin a mirror, that way his best friend can be himself...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 21:30 PDT
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Marvin the Martian... yours is about as interesting as a knot in a plank of wood. Annoying, hard, distracting, and it'll eventually fall out. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 14:58 PDT
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LMAO! I just love Evan's final thought! I couldn't agree with him more though, Marvin did seem like he just doesn't care so much, well for what we saw of him at the dinner!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 13:03 PDT
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Great chapter! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maddy's right. He just doesn't care enough. The place was special to him in a different way than it was to V. How could that not be the more important of the two things. And was someone spying on her? Or were they reading the newspaper with her in it? Anywho, great chapter.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 10:42 PDT
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I guess Marvin and V's date was cut short there huh? Madison was right when she said that Marvin only cares about what's happeneing if it involves him . I mean not once did he show any interest in what was happening in V's life. Okay thats a lie. Maybe he took an interest in Zel Roka but thats only because if he appeased the little girl it could maybe further his career. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next chapter to come out! Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 07:09 PDT
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Wait Evan wants to show V? He really likes her huh? LOL I new he was going to stop the date somehow! LOL I wonder though if Evan can admit that he wants to marry her then can she admit that she wants waay more then a boost in her career? Great chap Sue
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 07:04 PDT
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Yea um marvins a dick. he's entirely self centered I a geeky I don't even notice it kindve way. Likes its always something about him or his project. O boy Evan needs to put on his cape and pull a Mario aka crying out for me...REMIX!!!!! Next chapter plz :-D lol
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 04:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. what's $500 to Evan... lol two blocks..
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 22:31 PDT
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Brr... I know how terrifying big dogs rushing at you like that can be. Even the smaller dogs can get the adrenaline running sometimes. Sometimes the only way to get over it, is to be around calmer dogs, and learning how to treat them. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DOESNT LIKE DOGS!!! thats some thing Evan is going to have to change...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 18:32 PDT
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Aw, I felt so bad for her, but was laughing a bit at the dog part. I can understand why she doesn't like them, but they're just so friendly!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 16:59 PDT
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Great chapter! Keep it up and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 12:44 PDT
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Its just to befitting taht she doesn't like dogs! Lol. and I can admit after what Evan did in the court room I'd kill him! But since we have these implications that Evan really didn't do it the question is who did? I know u can't tell me but it doesn't hurt to ask. Lol and then there's EVAN ASKING HER TO MARRY HIM! Whoa boy didn't see that coming. And whats crazy is his youkai voice agreed. This is getting even more interesting. So how long before V gives in and realizes there is something between them? Great Chap Sue can't wait for the next!
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