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 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 13:27 PDT
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I forgot about Violca as well! Makes me just even more anxious to find out what happened! I think it's cute that Valerie is staying in Evan's old room and that she seems to like that he's lived a normal life! I hope things look up for you soon, Sue!
 Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 13:02 PDT
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Sending prayers up for you and your family, hon. I wish I could help you in a more tangible way, but we have a set of problems all our own. Your stories mean so much to me, it's like Christmas in my inbox whenever you update. Thank you. *hugs*
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 11:21 PDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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OOH.... what did Violca do? I hope we get a little insight as to what's the reason Evan and Cain aren't the best of friends. I've been wanting to know that for a while. Yay for Christmas in July! Well, I think this is going to be a very interesting trip, especially with Valerie there. I'm excited! Well, Keep up the fantastic work. I truly hope things get better for you! I'd love to help you out financially if I could but I am officially a broke college student. But believe you me, I would help if I had the funds. But, since I don't, I hope my moral support means something. Don't feel rushed to update, as your fans and readers we understand your situation. So, thank you again for all your hard work and creative genius! Keep on writing! -MSMND.
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 09:36 PDT
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OF COURSE SHE WENT 8D
 Reviewed By: Rogue Destiny [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 00:25 PDT
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Sue, this is rapidly turning into an epic, and I have to say, its damned entertaining too. Looks like Evan is finally wearing her down. Yay!
 Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 20:21 PDT
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YAAAAYYYY! Unexpectedly quick upturn of events! :) Geeze... I was wondering if Marvin made up the stuff about the blizzard... can't believe he ditched her that fast already. I really wonder if there is something he is hiding? I'm sure he is cheating on her, right!? Otherwise, no guy could be that uninterested in his fiancee... right? o_o Plus it seems almost like Marvin is trying to get her and Evan together ,and then maybe to guilt trip V into extorting money from Evan to give to Marvin.... and about the money for his "research" i'm just waiting for it to pop out that he has a gambling problem or something or a rich-people fetish...and his research is actually nonexistant. XD Anyway... score one for Evan! :) Hes so cute when he is embarrassed about being romantic. Thanks so much for another great and speedy chapter. ^_^ I depend on your work for a huge mood-booster and one of the few thinsg I can look forward to or get excited about... So, for your fans sakes, may your muses never desert you! ~Chaos~ P.S. You mightn't believe it but I am now in the XMas mood in the middle of July... lol
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 17:31 PDT
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I knew it! Yeah it came in terms of a snow storm, but I can't believe Valerie got thwarted again by Marvin. Good thing she left her phone at Evan's so he could convince her to stay with him in Maine. I know she'll have a good time there :)
 Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 13:18 PDT
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Hi! I don't think I've reviewed before (not big on reviewing, since it tends to be spam-orific). I'm a huge fan of the Purity Series, though, and though that it would probably be nice to tell you that, now that you're on the 9th installment, and I'm waiting with baited breath for each chapter to go up... Anyway, thank you for producing such a quality piece of work. You even spell everything right! That seems to be a problem for fanfictions.
 Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 11:23 PDT
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YES!!! She's gonna spend Christmas with Evan!! Woohoo! I could sing. This story has a way of making me smile so much that my cheeks hurt. Thaks for the update!
 Title: Love It
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 09:46 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Thanks so much for the chapters. I can't believe how much I loved your writing until it went away. I can't wait to read more!
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 05:17 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There off to Maine! I feel a little bad for Marvin though.
 Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2010 01:21 PDT
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Nice updates! I hope all is well with you. :) I thought Marvin was going to blow off V, but it wasn't his fault this time....but at least she will have fun in Maine. The parts where the outsider meets the family are always the best. :)
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2010 23:35 PDT
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A fortunate turn of events. I have to wonder if Marvin even remembers about Valerie most of the time...? I can't wait to see who all will be in Maine! Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2010 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This chapter makes me SUPER happy! V is going to Maine! Awwwwwwwww! I can't wait until the next chapter... You're an awesome writer!
 Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 19, 2010 21:59 PDT
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Thank you for this extra chapter Sue! I cant wait to see what happens when Valerie meets the Zelig family again. Although this time, it seems at a much more personal level yes?
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