| "A Broken Laptop is the same as a Broken Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: July 12, 2008 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like the story. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kags_4_eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it. plz write sum more!!!!
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: April 24, 2008 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you it was greeeeat I can not what to read more please please please please please please please please please update both stories they are great again thank you
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: April 21, 2008 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is really good but I could not read the chapter that you put up yesterday. please up date it is really goood. I know that have rewriten it and it is still good but, get to were things are going to ok thanks. plaese update.
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Reviewed By: Jamie Oliver On: March 04, 2008 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, the plot is good but it does get a little strange. Overall I really liked it so when are you putting the next chapter up, I hope it is soon cause i really want to know what happened!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 05:31 CST
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i dont understand anything... you got way to much happening at the same time..
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Reviewed By: Nanishisummer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 21:13 CST
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IT started out ok, but it just keeps getting stranger. I can't read anymore without going crazy, try imputing less of other animes all at once, makes it too confusing. And you need to have this in the Inuyasha section since the main person is inuyasha.
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