| "Almost Home, Country Roads" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Letty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2016 08:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your take on the characters. I would love to have
see where you would take it from here. You have a lovely sense of
flow and visualisation is excellent. Well done
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 20:25 PDT
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thank you so much for the update, i love this story and cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 15:15 PST
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hi can i have an update for christmas? and two for my birthday on jan 13?
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:57 PDT
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this is great, please update soon
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Reviewed By: celelorien On: August 13, 2008 12:59 PDT
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yey~! i lost the link to the fic for a while, but i'm so glad i found it again! :D i love Hatori's line "I think you've just been indirectly confessed to." XD it makes me giggle. Kyouya's being awfully forward, my~. I'm so glad it IS Mori/Haru! i love it so much! yaaay! i hope Satoshi isn't in any trouble. :0 maybe he's just lying low at the house? mwerh. the gossipy old biddies still make me laugh with their matchmaking. interesting to note that Hatori's gay - he always did seem (if you'll pardon the pun) like a fruit to me. X3 i mean that in the most loving way possible. a fantastic chapter! :D i feel like the story's really moving along. :3
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 03:13 PDT
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OMG!!! Funny! I LOVED this chapter! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: sunellope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very well written fanfic. I enjoyed it very much. I know that you felt they were oc but it was good. They did feel a little flat but in only on chapter it's hard to fill them out.
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Reviewed By: celelorien On: April 05, 2008 23:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahahaha, i rather liked this story! it's interesting to see Haruhi meet the Host club outside of a high school environment. fascinating that her dislike of kyouya is so pronounced, but it's pretty true to her character and his, lol. they always did clash. i am very excited about the possibility of mori/haru, because it is my absolute favorite pairing. ;3 i look forward to more from you! *goes off to see what else there is*
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 23:54 PST
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I like this story. It is very culturally correct, and I like that about stories. Please update soon!
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