| "Obsidian and Alabaster" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2011 18:53 EDT
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"Pregnancy is not a disability", haha. Damn, I just love the oneliners in this fic. Yet another amusing chapter as well as little hints about the pairings in Different. I like. Hope things have calmed down in your life because they sure haven't in mine. Ugh. |
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2011 05:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love all of your stories so much have read them thousands of times over and over again plz plz plz plz plz plz finish different circumstances i cant wait 2 see what happens next p.s: how could anyone not love that pairing |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 11:39 EDT
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Just couldn't keep away from this one, eh? Can't blame you, Zaraki and Ran make for an interesting couple even without all the shonen drama. The next chapter is going to be interesting. Doing it on a bus tour, geez. Always an adventure with them.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2009 12:19 EST
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Damn, these vague references are going to kill me. I hope you explain the deal with Yoruichi and her mysterious 'appointment'. One more chapter and you're done, eh? Dang, well hopefully this will pave the way for a few of those oneshots you have cooking up. And remember, RITE MOAR! ;)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 23:07 EDT
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Whoa, this one nearly got past me. Sneaky, sneaky. Well it's nice to know you're still alive. Anyway, I felt kinda strange sympathizing with Zaraki in this chapter, especially when fielding Ran's question about her makeup. Almost too eerie. Really fun chapter and highly light hearted, though I wonder who eventually married Momo. I thought you killed her, or maybe that was wishful thinking. ;)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 13:20 EDT
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I was going to put up a quote from Zaraki here but there were too many zingers. I was laughing the entire time, Zaraki is so biased its funny. Great chapter and lots of little teasers thrown in there. The biggest eyebrow raiser, "Fong's holiday"? Hmmmm, can't wait till next chapter when Zaraki learns next time that shopping + Ran = more than he bargained for.
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Title: i found it lol
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found the story and read all the chapters. I like they way you refered to certian ahem events from the other stories. like things from zaraki pov. great as always
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 00:36 EDT
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"I've heard the linen room at 4th Division is quite popular." *raises eyebrow* Foreshadowing much are we? Another funny little tale of the misadventures of Ran and Zaraki. I get the feeling the wedding you're alluding to is a surprise. Heh. I actually liked this chapter alot. Lots of Zaraki character development. Zaraki in first person is highly entertaining.
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Reviewed By: Ying On: March 16, 2008 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the idea of making that color spread a photo shoot! Thanks so much for the very hot, very sweet one shot that breaks up the tension/suspense you've got going on in "Different Circumstances". Great work!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh cute. Fluffy but cute. Now get to workin' on Friend, I'm dying to know what the hell happened to Toshiro. -_^
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