| "Yellow Brick Road" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: NitaGIRL On: August 27, 2009 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can i tell you how you had me in tears in certain parts...I really enjoy this story
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Reviewed By: vivenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story. I appreciate all of the attention to charachter and relationship development. I can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 19:43 CST
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I cannot believe that you only have five reviews over here. This is a great story. I love Kagome's seeming insanity. I know that not all of it is here, but I'll comment on some things anyway. When she tried to melt Sesshoumaru's mother, I about fell out of my chair laughing. And then it did work on Mikuboshi, or whatever his name is. Also, I was not squicked by what Sesshoumaru did to save Kagome when she was in the cave. It and the other incident was a bit hard to swallow only because it was so hard on Kagome, but I understood it perfectly. You made me feel very sorry for the shadows and I loved Toto and all the other references to the Wizard of Oz. Your portrayal of the characters is spot on and three dimensional. Your OC's are wonderful and three dimensional as well. Your writing is fluid and believable. The plot and action is awesome. I will be making a recommendation on my lj. Bravo! I hope you will continue to post this fic over here as I will be putting this link in my journal, as well as the one on AFF. More reviews will be forthcoming, but I cannot promise a lot or when. Thanks! Snow
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Reviewed By: CStuder67 On: October 10, 2008 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is unusual but the same. Let me explain: Same - S/K fic a feudal era love story, Unusual - twists and turns and unusual terms used are just fantastic!! I really have to think while reading this story. I find myself reading some chapters a few times just to make sure I understand all meanings of every word written. I truly enjoy reading this story! As you can see I'm not a writer and if I confused or offended you in away by trying to explain my enjoyment of you story, please do not take offense. I truly enjoy this fantastic story! Please continue with the twists and turns of total craziness. PS - Your lemons are very good also!
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Title: from SFP
Reviewed By: SFP [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: WalkingDead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting to say the LEAST. I'm enjoying this series, I'm glad you've been updating. Please, continue, your writing is great, and deeply appreciated.
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Reviewed By: SFP [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I defiantly like the references to the Wizard of Oz, very original. Moreover, I love the humor in your story, it is very refreshing. Can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far wow. I just finished the first chapter. It's definetly different. Not in a bad way. Sucked me in from the beginning. Funny and kind of sad in an odd way... and only a bit wierd. Wierd is a good thing though. Very good thing... okay back to the story. There is gonna be a back story right? Like how all these things came to be... blah blah. Okay, done badgering you. Once again, back to the story!
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