|"Repetition" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 23:46 CDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Very very nice. It's very hard to find good Peter Pan fics and this was great.
| Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 15:00 CDT|
That was really a nice read, though the tenses were a bit weird but I guess that was the effect you were going for.
| Reviewed By: BrownRecluse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 19:36 CDT|
Poignant and beautifully written. I loved this line, especially: But she is irreparably drawn to it, just as she has always been drawn to bodiless shadows without causes, and she reaches out for it. This was a joy to read!