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| "That Loser" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Romanitza On: September 16, 2010 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though the OOCness was intentional, it doesn't make it any less cringe worthy. I don't find this at all funny.
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Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle Undercover (not logged in) On: August 12, 2008 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
...? This was very odd. I'm curious to see how this will branch out. While it's refreshing that this isn't another one of those fics where Kai is the untouchable, flawless, and unbelievably cool hotshot(he's the exact opposite here- XD), I don't see any trace of Kai in this depiction; this could use an OOC warning. And don't forget Alternate Universe classification- more hits that way! I like putting characters in compromising situations as much as the next cruel fan, but I'm not sure where you're going with this. I'm definitely interested in seeing where this will lead, especially Kai's random obsession with mops! On a brighter note/afterthought, I like your portrayal of Tala so far- I imagine if he was a nerd he'd be the quiet bookish type (as opposed to a loud spaz or the uppity kind)!
| Reviewed By: Reioca Miniaka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Mops. The first time I saw the word mop I thought it was a typo. lol. Very funny. I never thought of Tala and Kai as nerds, but it's really funny. Keep up the good work.
| Title: I can't believe nobody reviewed this story!
Reviewed By: YaYa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my God! I CANNOT believe nobody reviewed this story! What you have so far is good and funny. Kai a nerd and obsessed with mops? Weird, but funny. Well, continue writing and keep up the good work! ^_^
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