| "Best Man Steals the Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 13:12 CDT
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I had to print out the next few chapters to take with me to a ballgame so I could read them. ^_^ I can't believe Hojo! He told her he was DYING so she would marry him? And he confessed to Inu that he had cheated on her more than the one time. Of course, Inu has never been faithful to ANY girl, -- always dating more than 1 at a time, -- what a dog! I had to laugh when Hojo bet him he couldn't even remember 6 of the girls he had dated last semester and he finally said he was sure one of them was a Kikyou. I SO love a story where she isn't a factor, and having her just lumped in with all the other colorless, faceless, girls was wonderful. I really liked the point you made with the Pepsi Kagome handed Inuyasha. The way he and Hojo were arguing over it was priceless. Leave it to Miroku to solve the problem. I'll try to finish up the story today. ^_^
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! I LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 14:43 CDT
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Heh heh! Inu is starting to see Kag's worth. His own girlfriend(s) pale by comparison. Actually, they all look SICK by comparison. LOL!! Her friends are already seeing the possible dangers. I loved the sticker! That was such an awesome way for him to see something special in her again. I love Kag sticking up for Kouga, though. The money issue came up again, -- the fact that she really doesn't have much and he's apparently loaded. It's a good thing he's going to have her to show him the true value of things. ^_^
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 14:30 CDT
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Ah, there's nothing like a good book, is there? I really liked the way he ended up staying so long. Of course, he went partying afterwards ... I'm looking forward to Kagome telling him she can't read sometime because she has a date. ^_^
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 14:23 CDT
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Thank you SO much for having Kouga join them at the movies in chapter 6! I loved it! It was good for Inu to see that there are other guys interested in her. She's not some plain, loser chick. I loved it when Kouga kept watching her and trying to hold her hand. The whole thing about him being "the wolf' was great! I can't believe she went home with Inu instead of Kouga, though. I wonder what he's going to do if she DOES go on a date with Kouga? Houjo is flipping out over the time Inu is spending with her and he is noticing the way inu is looking at her. Inu may think "Raccoon" is a fool, but HE'S the dumb one. LOL!! Great chappy!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 13:56 CDT
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Inu is still looking down on Kag and being uncooperative about their assignment. And so rude about her small room and amenities! She already told him she isn't made of money. Then he tells her she's a lousy girlfriend, but has good taste because she got hot wings. I'm still not sure why he thinks she's such a lousy girlfriend, -- Houjo cheated on HER, not the other way around. His calling her Kitten is kind of cute, except for the fact that he has such cutesy-named girlfriends. And I couldn't believe he turned around and yelled at Miroku for suggesting she wear a dress that shows a little cleavage. He had hinted at her dressing up himself. But, we're seeing a hint of his changing feelings, aren't we? Moving on! I was so excited to see you put up all of these chapters!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 13:15 CDT
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Just read chapter 4. Inuyasha sure wasn't very tactful around his girlfriend, was he? Then again, she didn't notice. LOL!! The plot thickens.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 18:36 CDT
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Just ran across this and I really like it. It's a cute idea and you're executing it really well. I liked the way Ksgome was able to change Inu's opinion with one simple, small gesture which let him see just a small part of what sets her apart from others. I loved the way Hojo put it: that it wasn't something outstanding or exceptional, -- just something nice. I have a feeling Mr. Inuyasha is going to start discovering how really beautiful she is, too, ne? I'll definitely be looking for more of this!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 16:44 CDT
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Wow this is really interesting!!! I cant wait to see what happens. please please please write more!!! b
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: SacredMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! write more!
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