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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That lemon was incredibly beautiful, and exceptionally written! Sizzling yet with just the right touch of romance (wow, my grammar is dead right now...) which is everything that a lemon should be. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 13:08 CDT
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Great chapter, I hope we find out what Sess & Shippo were up to for the 500 years!
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 00:16 CDT
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Wow... that was amazing! Update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha are finally together... what will happen next... at least they know sesshoumaru and shippo are there to help... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 22:16 CDT
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Really beautiful chapter
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: September 07, 2009 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story its really good update soon
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 03:42 CDT
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Oh wow, seems like Kagome just can't get a break and have a normal relationship with Inuyasha...that is really sad. But I really can't wait for Kagome to see Shippo again and see what happens now that the jewel is finally complete!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 17:00 CDT
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Really enjoying the story so far, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome & inuyasha are together... interesting reunion kagome & inuyasha had with sesshoumaru... lots of changes... now for their reunion with shippo and kirara?... the jewel is complete - what will they do with it now?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Temporal paradoxes are fun things... I wonder how long it will take Kagome to realize that if Inuyasha did go back to the past, it would thus change everything that has since become reality, meaning the Sesshoumaru that she was just speaking to, as she knew him, would then cease to exist, not to mention what may or may not become of little Shippou. Suppose one of those youkai who came looking for Inuyasha back in the past, should they end up finding him, started a battle way too close to Kaede's village? Somebody needs to explain to Kagome that everything is as it should be. Of course, I know you have no intention of splitting them up like her angst-ridden thoughts are currently focusing on, so I can't wait to see what you do in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 02:46 CDT
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sweet! somehow i missed the last chapter, so glad i got the alert for this one. ♣ it is so great that he could go back to her. one wonders when we'll see shippou and what sort of adventures await inuyasha and kagome now in the present. i guess they still have to protect the jewel until they can get rid of it. one wonders what kind of power bad youkai think they could get with it that they can't have with money or even the splitting of the atom-- personal strength is not something that is a determining factor in this age. ♥
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Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAY!!! I am so glad you have updated on this story... I've been so hoping you'd finish! Please don't let this one fall by the wayside, I am really enjoying your portrayal of Kagome - and the relationship between her and Inu.
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 02:31 CDT
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I am sad that Inuyasha had to say goodbye to everyone while Kagome couldn't, but I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chain of events. Keep up the good work ^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome and inuyasha are together... sad that inuyasha said goodbye to the others... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your work and have been reading it as quickly as I can. I really enjoy what I am reading and hope to finish reading what you have posted in another couple of days. I noticed it has been a while since you updated this work and I hope you finish it. Please don't leave us hanging as to whether he came back to Kagome through the well or through time.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 00:20 CDT
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I am currently having seperation anxiety .... not know what is happening.. argh!!! I just read the first four chapters and it was awesome... love this story.
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Title: Strength
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how could you leave it like this? Im almost in tears at not being able to read the whole thing...because the part that that is written is sooo good! Amber
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 14:00 CDT
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I just found this fic. I hope that you'll update it soon It's good so far! Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 03:01 CDT
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this is a great story, i'm glad that i found it.
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Title: Separation Anxiety
Reviewed By: Fenikkusuken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 18:01 CDT
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You win! BEST chapter cliffie I've had the pleasure of reading recently, to top off an excellent piece of storytelling!
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Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A short but well written chapter, so tense! I really like how he made that choice, to tell her and not be stubborn about it. It was a good choice. The circumstances about the well worry me, so I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome are being open with their feelings... why isn't the well letting kagome through?... hope inuyasha doesn't get trapped on the other side... hope they stay together... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 00:20 CDT
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I love this story! There are so many mysteries to be revealed. Now that Inuyasha is being so open about his feelings for Kagome, PLEASE don't trap him on the other side!!! :) I know, no promises, right?
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 18:46 CDT
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Awesome!! I just read the entire story so far, and I'm hooked!! I love how your giving us just enough information to keep us guessing!!! Marvelous work!! I can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Skater girl of 1876 On: July 19, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is one of the best I've read! It's amazing! Please don't leave it as a cliffhanger for too long!
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Reviewed By: K On: July 19, 2008 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is one of the best written that I've read. Please don't leave us on a cliffhanger for too long. I think I'd die of suspense.
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Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:41 CDT
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keep going i want to know what happens
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 14:45 CDT
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you are building the tension so nicely! the well won't work again, will it? you are going to make him go through all those years alone, aren't you? i love the way this story keeps me involved enough to try an anticipate where it will go next. thank you for all the work you have put into this. i am enjoying every minute of it!
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Reviewed By: anna7 On: July 15, 2008 01:16 CDT
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is there more?
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 05:07 CDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestangstfiction1st1.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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