| "Letters..." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it cant wait for more!!!!
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Title: letters
Reviewed By: kyokatz On: August 03, 2009 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please PLEASE update....I really like the story so please put up the next chapter...
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Title: yay an update!!
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the last two chapters! they are SOOOOO good. please keep writing i want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 02:32 CDT
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this is a great story, i cant wait until sess and inuyasha meet. are sess and some others demons or are they all human?
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Title: "amazingness"
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 20:29 CDT
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i love this fic! its really amazing and just to let you know that there are plenty human fics of this series so if people dont like it then they shouldent be reading it! i love your plot and the way rin acts and thinks! i'm excited to know whats gonna happen next! so if you originally had them all human dont change it! just write it the way you really want to write it. either way i'm totally gonna be supporting this fic so keep writing and good luck with what ever problems you have your computer or whatever. i'll wait.(but not that long!)
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai_ On: May 01, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These first 3 chapters caught my interest. I like that Rin is intelligent and slightly grownup for her age. Being an only child can sometimes do that. The grownup part especially. I speak from experience. There's only one thing missing, no mention of demons. I hope you didn't make them all human. I think the personality of the Inuyasha demon characters is formed and molded partly from being demon. Take away their demon side and you take away part of who they are. Sorry, I know you're the writer and it's your story. Otherwise, I like the plot.
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 15:22 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this fic as it is a dimond, at least in my eyes!!!! I just wanted to say something to inu_luv_luv, Lots of younger kids are smart, you never know Rin could be slightly autistic although it wouldn't be apparent! Just wanted to say that and Keep Writing loads more!!!! Feed my desire for more Sess/Kag with Rin on the side of course! Love Draca
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 11:10 CDT
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it's a good story so far!! and with some right twists in the future this could become really good too!! just... uh... it's a little disturbing to see Rin so... Intelligent. A brainiac. *shudder* wow. Anyway, doing good so far so add chappies!
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