| "After the Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: naruto_kurosaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story its got a lot of great stuff i only idslike the use of arashi as the 4ths real name since its incorrect & changing narutos mother too but those are my only complaints its a hell of a story.
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Reviewed By: johnito [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story so far ,but 1 thing i didnt like was around chapter 24 was that the three accepted the others so fast u should of put an arugument in it or something
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 09:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very Very Good! I'm glad itachi's ot being playedas a bastard in your version. I love himso much. It's great that rin and Kakashi were there fo Naruto.
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Reviewed By: Scribbling Death On: April 14, 2008 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! It's up! Unfortunately...it leaves me wanting to know what happened to Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke next in Hikidifuke (yes, I did spell that wrong--I have no idea how to spell that, actually)/Fire country capital. Who was the person who entered the nursery? What are the Konoha nins going to think of Sakura? Itachi--worried over Sakura? When is their true identity going to be found out, etc, etc??? Is there any way you could post an outline of what you were going to do? On another note...with this fic being back up, I did notice that there are grammatical errors and awkward transitions not present in Role of Seven so far. But...yeah, other then my rambling--it's great this is up!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is very good. I like it. A new story in my favorites !
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Reviewed By: Brown-eyed-girl On: April 07, 2008 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please write more soon. I love the way Naruto's so depressed. I shouldn't but i do. Now i feel depressed but this story is the best i've read in a long time.
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I have officially fallen head over heels for this story. You have to write soon. I have one going like this. Please write more soon or i will definately die. I'm sending this link to your story to a bunch of friends
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 02, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. i like how this is turning out. i hope you continue with it. update soon... ^_~
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