| Title: Coma|
Reviewed By: Kitan88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 01:02 CDT
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
I can't wait for the next chapter! you were right your writing has definitely improved since the 5th grade story. I like how you leave the reader hanging onto the last sentence making me wonder 'whats going to happen next?'