| Reviewed By: Cabbage rox my sox On: May 18, 2008 22:36 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Awesome...I don't think I need to explain any of my ratings here because this is a very well-written fanfic with a twist at the end. You've done an amazing job, since on seeing the title I was worried that it would turn out to be vaguely crack-ish, but I really love the way you make Kouyuu seem like a doctor at first, but then turns out to be a patient in the end, and how you turned his ability to get lost into a weird little quirk lol. Great job!