|"Careful What You Wish For" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Title: Excellent|
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 21:38 CST
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Don't see 'em short and sweet like this often. Good job making Sonic and Tails OVER 9000!
| Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: July 31, 2008 14:14 CDT|
this story is awesome i just cant stop reading it i hope in the future a new story just like this will be made *not demanding but excited* man i hope it will show up!
| Title: It's a pity...|
Reviewed By: TheVulpineHero1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 06:08 CDT
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Hey. I read your story, and, actually, I was pleasantly surprised. It just goes to show that (on this site at least, but on other sites too) you can't judge a story by the number of reviews. Okay, a little pointer- 'Vulpine' is a part of my user name, and as such I know precisely what it means. Throughout the story, you used it as a noun to describe Tails+similar. It's actually an adjective, meaning, literally, 'fox-like'. That's not actually a great oversight though. Just remember that things ending in the -ine suffix often mean -like. Simple mistake, but thought I'd flag it up. Also, your story reminded me of Dragon Ball/Z/GT. A lot. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, seeing as Dragonball/Z/GT did EVERYTHING, but it's just a general comment on the story. Good points? Well, you weren't afraid to kill Big the cat. He deserves it, frankly. It's also a fairly concise story, so it keeps moving on at a good pace, which is essential for an action story. As a last point, you say it's your first time writing with the Sonic crew. I hope you don't get disheartened by the poor response from this site. There really aren't enough people on it anymore. Still, I've been here (both active and inactive) for quite a while, and what I can say is that on the whole, it's a lot more of a family than other sites. The people here pretty much all know each other...or did. Well, I guess that about sums it up. This was a good story. I look forwards to reading more. You have any problems, give me a bell. I'll see if I can't help.