| "I am the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: west On: March 10, 2009 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! i can't believe it ctually ended... You are a freak of nature and i mean that in a good way. That was an amazing amount of writing. I waas happy to see the old naraku come back with his fire. You always push the limits with what is right and wrong with who you pair her with don't you? That's prob what makes the story so interesting. I can't wait to read the sequal, but could you please add in a description of the kids. it's hard to remember what they all look like. Asuna will me a big part of the story i'm sure. even if it isn't through her eyes. She is a "force of nature" as you like to say. Thanks and keep up the great work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Invite On: February 18, 2009 12:31 CST
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Amazing story! It is so well written. I was wondering if you could make a family tree if you have time... I'm starting to get confused with all of the children and their fathers!
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Reviewed By: west On: December 15, 2008 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i had to take home a few chapters to readon a cd cause my net was down but i must say i loved them. I also realized that you have enough pages to make like 3 or 4 novels by now... go you... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Invite On: November 25, 2008 09:07 CST
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I can't wait until another chapter is posted! This story is addicting!
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Reviewed By: west On: November 18, 2008 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome as always... and as usual i have not caught up to the end ch yet but i'm gettin there slowly... love that you brought vlad back like that
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Reviewed By: Invite On: November 08, 2008 07:42 CST
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This story is addictive! Please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: west On: November 07, 2008 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm up to the cubs birth and still lovin it. Just can't find enough time to catch up... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Gina_A On: November 06, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. very unique, it's just very hectic, but it works. love the diff world views.
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Reviewed By: Areria On: October 14, 2008 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely amazing. I cant believe it took me so long to find it! The concepts and your style are original. You're a breath of fresh air in the arena of cliche fanfics. It took me three days to catch up with this story when i started in late july. lol. Now i find myself checking for your updates almost everyday. Thank you for being a dedicated author and i really wish other authors on this site would follow your example.
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Title: hilo
Reviewed By: west On: September 24, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a chance to stop in and read some and as always i love it, but i got to go sleep now... studing and staying up to late don't go together well when u got to get up at dark o' 30 but i'll be back to finish reading it all.... hopefully soon... ^_^
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Title: 61
Reviewed By: west On: August 01, 2008 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so i just fin ch 61 and YAY She's going to egypt! I love that place. Anywho, coolio with the pups giving her a hard time. i have one son and he's a hand full. all those kids wih powers would be a nightmare! As much as i'd love them i'd be tearing my hair out. ^_^;
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Reviewed By: west On: July 30, 2008 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again, it's me. Sorry I've been a little busy but i'm back. I only just read where she lost two mates in a week but i wanted to leave a coment. OUCH! Again she loses a mate right after saving Naraku in a way. Not only that but she's not even with him now. Hmmm... wonder if she has a chance at a norm family with her friend or will the ancient try and make her his or maybe it will be a total mind f*@& and blow me away again... ^_^;
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Reviewed By: west On: July 13, 2008 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, he's dead! Now that i have stated my joy i must say i realized that this is like a never ending story. The way you make it is more like a series than just one story. That's not a bad thing in the least though. If you keep the story going like this it could go on and on and on... you get the point. Hehehe. Well any who i loved it and i hoe She gets a third mate. Hope the other two can deal if that happens though... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: July 12, 2008 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She'll have a her own herum (sp?) before she knows it. Kind of funny really but cool. And i love the fact that one kid finaly got her looks. I love white hair. Well, asalways, Great work and keep it up... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kate and Sess 4ever On: July 10, 2008 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. ;) Good work.
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