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| "On That Day" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 17:30 CST
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oh, what a happy aniversary it turned out to be. i love the way you avoided driving the obvious point home. this was brought right to the brink of saying that, then backed off. thank you for having enough confidence in us to be able to come to the right conclusion. great short!
| Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 18:26 CDT
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O.o i get it...i think...?.....well since kagome met inuyasha on da day of her birthday it musta bin like an aniverysery of da first time dey had met...if im right tell me cuz i wanna no lol gud job and keep it up da only thing i didnt like was dat u wuld say "Kagome sighs blah blah blah she rolls her eyes at da hanyou" like wat splendent said ur mixing past wit present but still it was a very beautiful stori! keep it up ^_^
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 01:00 CDT
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You need to watch your verb tense, as you were mixing past with present, but other than that, I thought it was a really cute little drabble. How time does fly...
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