| Reviewed By: deckman1063 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 07:19 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
A good start, although it only deviated from the main story line in the last couple of sentences. A large deviation, of course. I look forward to where you are going to take the story with this interesting new twist.