| "The Romance in a Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good start if you decide to continue it. You should try and flesh it out a bit though. Add a little more detail, or make the chapters longer. Either way I hope you update it soon.
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Reviewed By: bigguy1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome keep up the work
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