| "*~{Lamenting Beauty From The Mistic Moon}~*" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Souta is alive but nobody knows where he is and he wants to be saved by his sister. Well it seems poor InuYasha is falling in love with Kagome all over again. I can not wait for the battle between InuYasha and Naraku because it seems to be shaping up to something great. Maybe a lemon with Kagome and InuYasha to spice things up.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This getting really good I can not wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if InuYasha would remeber Kagome from his in the Fedual Area of Japan? Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No I am not pshyic but this is a really great story and I like the way it's going keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am courious is Van going to Kagome's father in this story. WHat I mean is if Hitmone is VAn's wife and she was sent back to Earth pregnant with Kagome then that would be really interesting. Please continue this getting really good and diffently it's fun to read. Again keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you have InuYasha and Van working together. Here is an idea though an allience with Van and InuYasha to bring about peace and to protect Kagome. It is just an idea but you do not have to use it if you do not want to.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work. I really like the way that you made InuYasha sound more mature in this story.
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work this is very good.
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