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| "forgoten love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: WinterSwirls On: May 29, 2008 22:03 CDT
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Lucretia >_>;; You should work on capitalizing names and sentence beginnings. Also you should try to steer clear of internet slang within a story. I always feel if i'll enjoy.. or even if I would want to read a story by how the description is on the search page.
| Reviewed By: vampirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
i did run through spell check but it still htes me and gives me the wrong words no matter how hard i try!!!! and thanx for the name!
| Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 13:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
his name is nanaki. :P Again, captilize names, try running through spell check, otherwise, pretty good.
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