| "Sick At Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: CheyCheyRain On: February 25, 2012 10:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style buut I think the story is short. I think more chapters would be good especially as I want to know how the other students react. I did not notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. A lot of stories have Draco sick in them or passed out and that is how they get together although this story is different than most. I like it but I was disappointed when it ended so quickly. Overall this is a good story and i hope you continue writing. |
Reviewed By: GataAgua(unsigned) On: November 10, 2008 06:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story, love how you inserted the characters' actions smoothly.
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 02:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
I think that you need to write more! I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 02:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was simply very sweet! I just love seeing Draco all helpless. :) *squeals like a rabid fangirl*
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