| "Actions Speak Louder Than Words" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: C. On: February 01, 2010 05:44 CST
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oh please keep writing this it's really amusing and good!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 22:29 CDT
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*face palm* He walked out before Myoga was finished speaking. Figures. He is probably going to miss something very important. Hmmm, let me amuse myself with pondering the next step in the ritual. First there is the fighting, maybe then the less dominant flees and is hunted like prey? Cat and mouse. LOL Inuyasha is already playing prey by avoiding Sesshoumaru, even though Sesshoumaru doesn't appear to be hunting him. *giggles* I'm glad Myoga came in with answers. Sooo, even Sesshoumaru may not be aware that the two 'could be' going through a courtship of sorts. Are we ever going to find out the identity of the other half of Inuyasha's conversation in chapter one? Not that I have to know. Just curious. Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Toni k On: June 16, 2009 14:24 CDT
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This is cute and oh, so funny...I've read bits of it to my daughter and she thinks Inu's reaction is hilarious. Wish you could make it serious - cause Sess's reaction to finding out his youkai wants Inu as his mate would be outstanding.
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Reviewed By: toni K On: April 19, 2009 22:37 CDT
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that's funny, tho I am confused by the fact there is no chapter 2..... was it Miroku talking to Inuyasha? I would have thought of Kagome but I don't think she'd be as 'forward....'....hope you write more on this.
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Title: Chapter two
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 09:59 CDT
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Ah! I noticed that I had read and reviewed chapter one. It must have been a long time ago. This chapter was absolutely hilarious. You could turn this into a game! Sesshoumaru could get frustrated at Inuyasha's craziness and use Inuyasha's fears against him and have it backfire. That would be so funny. I can see Inuyasha running away from Sesshoumaru's groping hand. ROFL Truly, this has potential for many fun chapters. I still don't know who gave Inuyasha advice though. Heheh.
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 09:51 CDT
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You're alive! Hiiiii! That first chapter was very amusing. I'm not sure who is speaking with, but it is someone who knows something about youkai courtship. Sango maybe? She has the most experience with youkai. OMG! It could be Shippou! Very funny though. I'm off to read the next chatper. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: IC On: May 23, 2008 07:19 CDT
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I think it was Kagome. For some reason the conv sounded fimine.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 18:52 CDT
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this is very good, i cant wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: SBRH On: May 22, 2008 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It could be Miroku... well, all i know is that it's not Kagome or shipo. um, do you plan on expanding with this story? that would be nice.
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Reviewed By: Lauren Kona On: May 22, 2008 10:35 CDT
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I think its probably Miroku as when he's not being a perv he is pretty intelligent and open to ideas. He is also one of inuyashas true friends who i could see him opening more up to than kagome because she's a girl and it's harder to open up to the opposite gender. Kagome would also talk differentally and agrue back with inuyasha over every little thing. This is why i think its Miroku. I liked this alot. You explained why Inuyasha and Sesshomaru would be a good couple which is something i could never find even though i love the pairing loads :D
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Reviewed By: Toni - anf600 On: May 22, 2008 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sounds like Kagome for the other person...an insightful Kagome who isn't all that common in a lot of fan fics that are yaoi. Would like to read more - this is a great opening chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 06:08 CDT
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Hm, good question. Who would know of youkai mating behavior and not be too bashful to talk about it? If we're only within the realm of the tiny group, I think that brings our selection down to Miroku and Shippou. If we broaden the selection, there is also Totosai and Myoga, but Inuyasha made no reference to 'old man'. My choice would be Shippou, except that Inuyasha would inevitably bonk I him. Considering Inuyasha's behavior, Miroku would be the best choice. However, it could be Shippou. I'm thinking inside of canon. Would you email and let me know if I've got it right? I really liked this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 05:18 CDT
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as i read this, i thought he was talking with kagome. after you comment, i realized most of it could have been just about anyone in their group, even kaede. the only thing that still makes it feel like kagome was the 'whatever' response. that's more modern than the rest would use, i think. but whomever he was having this conversation with, it was great! i love the way you left poor inuyasha confused. as if he didn't have enough to think about in his life. i would love it if you would continue it for just one more chapter. it would be so much fun to read about the two of them fingting, and how inuyasha thinks of things, then. thank you for a wonderful story.
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