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"Seeing Clearly" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2008 19:47 CDT
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this was nice, i only have one problem with it and that is the fact that she got hit protecting hunny. hunny is a world class blackbelt who routinely beats other older, bigger, and more experienced adults, he would never allow anyone to hurt haruhi when he is around. it would have made more sense if a guy was jealous over a girl who designates haruhi.

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