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| "Bajo Mi Máscara" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: kumorinox On: December 17, 2010 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story so far, but as you said that you would update soon and that it would not take a year to do so. i feel that i should point out that your year is almost up. lol. and i am teasing you, i just want to know what happens next. thank you. | Reviewed By: fadedLily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason why the style of writing is an eight is because I feel like as a first person POV, you could be doing a lot more introspection into Trowa's feelings and his thoughts. It would also be cool to have more description of the scenes, expressions, etc. Enjoyment factor is a nine for the same reason. Aside from that, I am quite enjoying the story thus far. I love Quatre and Trowa together, and can't wait to see where you're going to take this story. I hope that you update soon.
| Title: Turmoil. An adiquate definition.
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 20, 2008 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I don't think ive ever read a story from Trowa's POV, but I never thought he'd be so...emotionally distracted? A very new twist and I havta saw that I like it alot. I think it adds a bit of zest to the standerd GW stories. Brilliant work, I can't wait for more! Please update soon, until then, ja!
| Reviewed By: Emmee On: June 21, 2008 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Man, now I wanna give Trowa a hug.
| Title: MissPen
Reviewed By: Nishii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 08:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10. I really like were this is headed, you really got down the feeling of nervousness in the first meeting, while making sublte additions of angst and sexual tension. Very nice, I hope to be reading a lot more of your work.
| Reviewed By: Emmee On: June 08, 2008 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ha, ha, ha! poor Trowa XD
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