| "The Choices we make" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: The Choices We Make
Reviewed By: Mary Lou On: August 08, 2011 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have some grammatical errors, but they do not detract from the story. I love the humor in the story. You have laid a nice foundation for the story to develop. It is such a fresh idea that L isn't the original L. I am hoping that L and Light stay together. |
Title: Nice
Reviewed By: aura9969 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 01:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like the direction that you are going in with this story. There were just a few grammar errors, but not enough to take away from the story and the plot so far. I hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 16:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
This had to be the most intersting LxRaito fic I have ever read, very funny as well. Please continue it is really good
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